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Hello Jared,

First of all, thank you for choosing this task. You've done a terrific job :) Your essay has been a very interesting and enjoyable read.

I'd like to suggest a few minor improvements that I think would make it even better. Just so you know, I'm ready to approve your work and mark the task as complete regardless of whether you decide to enact my suggested changes, but I think it wouldn't take you too long to implement them.

Here are my suggestions:

• Could you add a few links where appropriate? I'm thinking, for example, about: links to your previous Code-in tasks, links to your Gerrit patches/commits, links to the documentation you've used on the wiki, links to the video you uploaded, etc.
• You mention that you were helped by a few developers (Aude, Hoo_man). Was that on IRC? Or another venue? Providing just a little more background here would be helpful.
• Could you maybe add a little more details about the difficulties you encountered while trying to compile Kiwix? Is there any documentation that was lacking or unclear? Anything we should improve so others don't face the same issues?

I hope this makes sense. Let me know if you have any questions :) guillom 16:10, 4 December 2013 (UTC)