- §3.1 : Various tools and resources also rely on the current structure, making structural changes a complicated and detail-oriented task.
- What "tools and resources" are you talking about? An example or two would be helpful.
- §3.9 : The overall process should help advance Wikimedia communities. [...] The Wikimedia community should be interested in and willing to work on the documentation.
- Do you really mean "Wikimedia" here? Or MediaWiki? I'd say MediaWiki, but the context doesn't really help disambiguate.
Overall I think it's a very good document detailing the current and the ideal status. The guidelines are sensible and useful. What seems to be missing is how we can actually get there. Perhaps it wasn't part of the deliverables, but without a clear action plan it's difficult to really know where to start.